Anamatic Feedback

- We need to make clear that the first shot of the video will have ambience sound as oppossed to just silence.

- Perhaps we need to try 'shot reverse shot' insetead of point-of-view shots in our acting shots at the beginning.

- Add more shots to the acting sequence to make it more dramatic (for example a hand opening the door).

- The sound of the suitcase rolling along the ground should be filmed seperately for dramatic effect.

- Add more low shots of the suitcase to build upon the scene.

- Ensure that flashback scenes are very dramatic, and to experiment with more shots whilst filming them.