Missing You Pitch

Missing you pitch

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When we presented our pitch, we made sure we took turns alternating who was speaking to the class. Here is some of the feedback that we recieved:

1. Our Pitch was very clear, and our ideas were well planned.

2. Our idea abour re-inventing our video for an older audience was not clearly explained enough in the slideshow (although we did ensure that we explained to the class verbally that this was our intention, mainly focusing on the digipack and magazine advert to portray this).

3. The idea of us using natural weather was well recieved, as well as the idea as using nature as props. It is a very modern take on a video as it is very simple. We were advised to plan the times of our visit to catch the weather at the best times.

4. We were told that our intended audience was very clear and obvious, and the use of black and white feedbacks was well recieved as it added variety to the video.

5. The colour identification idea that we had was something that was highlighted as one USP of our video, and it is also a very standard feature of many girl group videos.

Overall, our pitch was very successful. Nobody pointed out any faults and we had a very good plan in place which people could clearly see. We could of improved the pitch by adding pictures of ourselves; saying this, we did use self-taken photographs for our mise-en-scene slides.